Type refining

For independent and during class I've been refining the type. I added a black fade down the bottom to make it more readable, as well as moving some of the white text in the illustration slightly to make a few of the birds more visible - because I had feedback that they were starting to get a bit lost.

a more asymmetrical version? I think it doesn't quite look right in comparison to the centred image.

tried moving the type down a little- this is too much though. I quite like the italic type though?

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With this one, I changed around the headline a few times

Removed the extra line - this fits in the space better

-or a more direct headline?

this is probably too simplified - the gap above the text is a bit too big.