For independent study I continued ideating and developing my concepts, as pictured below. We had a lecture about style/concept, and then in small groups talked about style and connotations and how it can add to/change the concept.
Then we paired up and discussed each other's posters. We mostly talked about my 'they're just words' one, since that's my favourite. Ruth thought the message was clear, though didn't immediately understand what the caption meant - because when printed out the words on the magpies are quite hard to see. I will make them a bit more obvious, probably. Also had some feedback that maybe the white gap between the birds is too big - it almost seems as if there's a barrier, rather than them being very vulnerable like it's supposed to be. Also I should add a tagline maybe?
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